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@Mao well done for handing your your assignment 👏
This is a well written essay – I’m impressed. (You can see the ticks in blue parts I really like) The red are corrections. Mostly regarding the use of the article
(You might find this useful: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/articles/)
Vocabulary, structure and fluidity is marvellous 🌸👍