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This is excellent @Lu_Corde – poised and hardly any errors. Am really happy with this đź‘Ź
> as THE economy began to arise, (I’ve posted a link to a grammar lesson in the other essay you wrote)
> the so-called trash TV acquired importance – I suggest replacing ‘acquired’ with ‘gained’
> steal audience from traditional TV – audienceS
> to go in talk or reality shows – to go ON talk or reality shows
> the income (not plural)
