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  • Kerin

    Administrator
    November 13, 2020 at 1:53 pm

    Thank you @JoRu – well written essay (if somewhat bleak! Culture is indeed at risk 😟)

    Please look at my feedback. In red I have made corrections and in blue I have made suggestions to bring the level up.

    Can you try to fix points 1-3?

    1 and 3 are grammar errors. 2 – Can you think of a synonym for ‘often’? (as you used it in the previous line)

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