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Very clever & amusing @victorpereira !
I was imagining Tim Roth playing one of these characters!
Let me give you a few pointers:
> I can’t remember when was the last time this happened, > I can’t remember the last time this happened or I can’t remember when this last happened,
> I betcha a tenner that this two sandwiches short of a picnic baldy couldn’t grow HIS hair even with the best fertiliser.
> focus ON
> he felt in 3 seconds unconscious -wrong verb! Can you fix it?
>Baldy turns your head to the light and outshines both of them, – the time and the pronoun are wrong. Can you fix them?