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I saw one in the MOMA and it captured me for ages!
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1. This sentence is long and is a bit confusing because of the complex grammar. It should read like this:
The first time I saw this painting, I was reading an art book for children, and little did I know that it would become my favourite painting and that I was going to buy a book about the artist written in French just because it had a picture of this painting!
2. but there was also something pleasant about it.
3. in dreams everything can be as we want it to be