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So interesting @valeria.maraviglia thanks for sharing. I have never had the opportunity to visit China (it’s on my bucket list!). What an experience!
What you’ve written is very well expressed. Here are a few pointers to make it even more fluent!
TIP! When you use words and phrases that indicate that you’re about to present an important fact or idea, use a comma:
In my opinion, On the other hand, personally speaking, For instance, However etc etc
The comma helps to introduce the idea and signal a slight interruption in the sentence, so it will read and sound more fluent.
> well-recognized – replace with well-known
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