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@altedua , you definitely have an advanced English level – your writing is very strong; rich vocabulary and solid structures and you don’t seem to have any major issues with grammar. What a pleasure to read. 👏
Here’s some feedback for you:
> to fanatise (wrong word) its citizens – to radicalise
> Who speaks English most definitely... to sound more natural: WHOEVER speaks English most definitely … (WHOEVER pronoun: the person or people who and used for emphasis instead of ‘who’ in questions)
> …since Chinese students don’t choose learning❌ English WILLINGLY but RATHER because they are obliged to do so
⚠️ Can you try to correct the point above with the ❌?
> To raise an English speaker nation seems an essencial factor for China to win the race over the other super powers. > To raise an English SPEAKING nation seems an essenTial factor for China to win the race AGAINST the other super powers.
Let me know if you need clarification on anything 👍
