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All courses Forums TV series, binge watching and pilots Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. Reply To: Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies.

  • Kerin

    Administrator
    February 16, 2021 at 4:43 pm

    Well done @enrica – this is very good indeed! I think you’ve warmed up đź‘Ť

    Please have a look at my corrections and please ask me if you need anything clarified.

    > Television’s influence is one of the most important issue of our time.

    When we use this expression: one of the most/best, the following noun has to be in the plural form: Television’s influence is one of the most important issues of our time.

    However! Here : Most of the contents broadcasted … content is uncountable. Therefore: Most of the content broadcasted

    > It influences in a positive sense the way that people think about such important social issues as gender, class and race.

    To help the sound of this phrase, you can either at some commas: It influences, in a positive sense, the way that people … or change the word order: In a positive sense, it influences the way that people ….

    > Educational programs can teach young generation important values – either: young generationS or youngER generationS

    > Spelling: developping > developing

    wacth > watch

    Very happy with this writing task Enrica. And you pose a thought-provoking question at the end there! Well done 🤗