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  • Kerin

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    February 26, 2021 at 10:24 am

    It is so true – normal is not enough anymore (this depresses me so much!) I am nostalgic for old TV shows that were just … normal!

    Furthermore, I fear that the media is insular in most places in the world. Often I will bring up something I’ve read to my mother (who lives in the UK) and she is oblivious to it. The British press are becoming more and more insular and I worry that it will worsen with Brexit … anyway, I digress!

    Excellent piece of writing @justine.maebe – logical, with clear progression using linking phrases, rich vocabulary and the grammar constructions are sound. Well done đź‘Ť

    Here are my notes for you. Just message me if you have any questions or need any clarifications:

    > spelling: Television is a reflection of today’s society

    > lexical suggestion – replace welcomes: It can create a wonderful virtual world that allows and invites you to relax

    > Suggest deleting or replacing ‘very’ – At the same time it’s also a powerful medium (or) an extremely powerful medium that can influence the consumer.

    You might like this post! https://hub.englishdigitalacademy.com/quick-win-5-powerful-adjectives-in-english/

    > probably just a typo!: by the end of the evening you’ve spend ⚠️- spent

    > In result ⚠️ watching television becomes less expensive – As a result watching television becomes less expensive

    Excellent work Justine. Keep it up!