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This is much better @Lu_Corde – good!
Just this, para 1: in such a way to give the watchers a WAY to going deeper inside the topics he talks about.
> the collocation is: to give someone a way of doing something
> in such a way to give the viewers a WAY of going deeper inside the topics he talks about.
ps. sorry – I missed the word watchers the first time I read it! It should be viewers or audience
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