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Hi @wanda, I totally agree with you! It is a natural and healthy process. I think I am coming to terms with that now 😂 I was perhaps mourning a little bit my ‘youthfulness’ but now nine times out of ten I prefer staying home … and I’m quite happy about it!
I’m also happy to see you are using some excellent vocabulary here – great!
Here are a few tweaks to make:
> … but being alone it’s become extremely important. (we don’t need to use it here)
> … but being alone has become extremely important. ✅
> I also noticed that my habits about the sport … (‘sport’ doesn’t need the definite article)
> I also noticed that my habits about sport... ✅
> Outgrowing certain things and branch out others …. here you use the gerund form with outgrowing, so you have to use the same form with ‘branch’. We also need to add the preposition into: to branch out into something
> Outgrowing certain things and branching out into others … ✅
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