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This is super work @Mattia.Rosi Well done!
✅ you have explained the reason for the request
✅ you’ve stated the deadline
✅you’ve given dates clearly
✅ you’ve made your request polite
Some grammar points:
>to allow someone TO DO something (infinitive)
> in order to allow our customers uploading ❌
> in order to allow our customers to upload ✅
> At ‘moreover’ take a new sentence (remember, we English speakers like shorter sentences 😂)
and change the structure (we don’t really say: we need that… )
> Moreover we need the website to be offline for a while because we have to test it after the release.
> help someone TO DO something (infinitive)
>Do you think you could help us coordinating these activities with your team?
>Do you think you could help us to coordinate these activities with your team?
👍 Really happy with this Mattia, keep going!
