Reply To: Make a decision

[Kerin]

Hi Diego,

This phrase would be stronger if you added a conjunctive adverb, like this:

I do not have large sums to invest and I am afraid of losing my savings. Therefore, I think it is a good idea to ….

I suggest:

According to an article I read a few days ago, you should avoid high-risk investments only if you think you’ll need ACCESS TO your money at any time.

Watch out! Money is uncountable >

> If, on the other hand, you want to set them aside for many years … ❌

> If, on the other hand, you want to set IT aside for many years … ✅

Nicely done!