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Superb work Ecaterina,
✅ the tone is appropriate (formal, but friendly)
✅ the language structures you have used are appropriate
✅ you are inviting further collaboration in the future
Here are a few suggestions:
> I would like to thank you for the invitation to our yearly Christmas Party. > should this be ‘your’?
>The location chosen is fantastic, ….. word order: The chosen location is fantastic, or simply: The location is fantastic,
> I hope the party will be a success and looking forward to the next event where I could be present, too. No need for the comma here: I hope the party will be a success and looking forward to the next event where I could be present too.
Let me know if you have any questions!
Well done 👍