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  • Kerin

    Administrator
    November 29, 2021 at 12:24 pm

    Superb work Ecaterina,

    ✅ the tone is appropriate (formal, but friendly)

    ✅ the language structures you have used are appropriate

    ✅ you are inviting further collaboration in the future

    Here are a few suggestions:

    > I would like to thank you for the invitation to our yearly Christmas Party. > should this be ‘your’?

    >The location chosen is fantastic, ….. word order: The chosen location is fantastic, or simply: The location is fantastic,

    > I hope the party will be a success and looking forward to the next event where I could be present, too. No need for the comma here: I hope the party will be a success and looking forward to the next event where I could be present too.

    Let me know if you have any questions!

    Well done 👍