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Top marks on this @Lu_Corde well done:
✅ you used your own words
✅ you identified the main idea
✅ you found relevant ideas & omitted irrelevant details
✅ you kept the meaning the same
✅ you used attributive tags
✅ you kept your opinion out of it
Let’s have a look at some corrections:
> missing article: Emma Taggart describes the main milestones of THE life and artistic career of the Polish painter Tamara the Lempicka.
> During THE 20s and In THE 30s
> … and moves to THE United States
> word order: The success brings also…. > sounds better like this: The success also brings ….
Grammatically, also can be put in lots of different places in a sentence, but changing its place will also change the meaning and emphasis of the sentence. It’s difficult to learn this as it’s a very subtle difference, but a good way to try is to basically put also next to or as close as possible to the word that you are highlighting.
