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Well written Anna-Maria.
Some suggestions:
> Instead of to construct a brand image, we say to build a brand image
> However, Luca still doubts that their budget probably doesn’t stretch that far. Because we are using ‘doubt’ it is a sort of prediction, so the future tense sounds more natural here. Also we wouldn’t use the double negative:
However, Luca still doubts that their budget will stretch that far.
> To Lucas’s doubts I suggest: In answer to Lucas’s doubts
> This isn’t wrong: … before it’s too trendy and expensive. If you add ‘gets‘ it sounds even better: … before it gets too trendy and expensive.
Let me know if you need any clarifications! 🤗