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Top marks on this Andrea, well done:
✅ you used your own words
✅ you identified the main idea
✅ you found relevant ideas & omitted irrelevant details
✅ you kept the meaning the same
✅ you used attributive tags
✅ you kept your opinion out of it
Let’s have a look at some corrections:
The main point the author makes is that “Made in Italy” labels continue to develop their businesses successfully, DESPITE the rising low-cost manufacturers from the Asian market and the RECENT economic crises.
despite v although – see this link to understand the difference
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This manifacture is based on the exploiting of work conditions to optimise the profits. ❌
This manufacturing is based on exploiting the work conditions to optimise the profits. ✅
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To conclude, the author emphasises that can’t continue to exist these painpoints between such gorgeous products and their production processes.❌
WORD ORDER: To conclude, the author emphasises that these painpoints can’t continue to exist between such gorgeous products and their production processes.✅
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